Comments on: The Good News, Jogger and A Day With Milena Velba

By: Jorge Fonte

Jorge Fonte — Mon, 15 Jan 2018 08:57:48 +0000

Para poder responder bien a tus preguntas…. vas a tener que leer el relato.

To answer your questions well … you will have to read the story.

By: debrozador

debrozador — Sat, 13 Jan 2018 05:09:27 +0000

jorjee no te disculpes. si no les mola tu acento ke se jodan, ellos lo tienen facil todo en ingles y nosotros tenemos ke saber 70 idiomas. a lo ke importa: te la follaste? sabes is va hacer hardcore cuando se kede sin dinero? 😀

By: Jorge Fonte

Jorge Fonte — Sun, 05 Nov 2017 09:43:58 +0000

Sorry for my English. I have tried to translate it as best as I have known, but obviously it is very difficult to write in the language of Shakespeare without being native. Originally, the text is written in Spanish, and when it was translated, some errors occurred. I knew it. It was a risk I wanted to take, because my intention was to share the book with all the Milena fans. That’s why I put it at the lowest price that Amazon Kindler allowed: one dollar.
Thank you for your comments. They seem fair and precise.
I will try to give the text to a professional translator and republish it.
Thank you

By: 2Busty

2Busty — Thu, 12 Oct 2017 13:35:20 +0000

@JaimeE
We released this especially for you 😉 photos look like shot by mobile phone or webcam and we were waiting for Cassie0pia’s next update.
http://www.2busty.net/2017/cassie0pia-new-model-at-yesboobs-photo-debut/

By: Jaime E

Jaime E — Thu, 12 Oct 2017 05:07:52 +0000

It may not be 2 sets per month but any Milena content is greatly appreciated. Let’s hope there’s still Milena to go.

Also, @2busty wake up!!
Yesboobs announced yesterday that they would be working with Cassie0pia, one of the most promising new commers.

By: Kyle N

Kyle N — Thu, 12 Oct 2017 04:14:06 +0000

The author is a professional writer! However, his command of English is not at a high enough level to write in as he would be able to in Spanish. A good litmus test of his ability to write in English would be to simply read the sample given here a few times and see if you can make it through without feeling frustrated or confused. Very glaring grammatical errors (as well as punctuation and spelling) that are obvious from his thinking in Spanish and translating directly into English; which for ANY language is a major faux-pas! It is most noticable when it comes to gender (saying he/his or she/her interchangeably). Sentences also end very abruptly at times or run on. Very desperately needs professional editing!

Also, this is an obvious fan-fic. He wrote it as if he were the protagonist, Carlos. That is fine though because despite it being a fan-fic, it feels authentic and believable… well, until you reach the end.

Mr. Fonte obviously has skill enough in his writing that, despite the language barrier, he can weave a good yarn. It flows nicely enough and the mood is set well! The thing to take away from this is that, it isn’t an erotic novel, it’s not about “hurr durr tits” it’s about a fondness that the author and, I suspect many other men (myself included), have for this woman and what she has done over the decade. It feels like a really long “Thank you Note”. That’s what I got from it. It reads like an ecchi manga. “Awestruck young man meets favourite big-bust model, has no idea what to do but composes himself and rises to the occasion”!

Given the subject matter, his style (despite the language barrier, again) and the length of the book on top of the fact it is a fan-fic… this is actually pretty well written considering he could have down a much more different and, ahem, “overt” route!

I recommend it. It’s not gonna blow you away, you’ll get a laugh outta it (especially if you speak English natively, you will cringe but laugh) and he put more effort into it than simply writing what 99% of other writers of fan-fics on this subject matter write.

6/10. Needs to be edited! It flows nicely, needs to describe setting more, good at setting mood though.

By: Kyle N

Kyle N — Thu, 12 Oct 2017 02:50:51 +0000

Amazing news!!! As for the book, well, the English is weird but, fuck it, I’ll buy it and give an honest assessment.